“Good Communication Is Essential” posted a statement from 2014 by Akbar R Khan, a Software Systems Engineer, stating that experienced engineers would recognise that a clear line of communication is essential for the ideas of an engineer to materialise into mature products, but engineering students would fail to notice that fact

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Akmal Rusyaidi said…
4th line, missing a comma.

No missing sentence fragment
September 6, 2022 at 10:22 PM
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